Free Writing 10/29

It was 1:35 AM in an orange 1997 Pontiac, two heavy set 23 year old's were clumsily working towards losing their virginity. The portly young man made countless attempts to enter his big bodied counterpart but sexual inexperience proved to be a roadblock. An air of uncomfortably filled the cramp sedan as the two grew frustrated with their inabilities. After about ten minutes of unsuccessful attempts at insertion the hefty gentleman had arrived at his destination, sexual ecstasy. "This is what my not fat friends talk about" he thought has excitement filled his entire body. The rotund lass that accompanied him felt a feeling of shame and disappointment, as her dreams of this interaction had been more grand that what the chubby fellow was providing her. Tens of seconds had past and the man had gather some confidence about himself as he began to feel light-headed, "Oh no", he thought and seconds later came the conclusion of the outing. He hung his husky head in disappointment, she laid and meaty hand on his beating chest and said "Hey good stuff, that wasn't too bad at all!"



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It was 1:35 AM in an orange 1997 Pontiac, two heavy set 23 year old's were clumsily working towards losing their respective virginity. The portly young man made countless attempts to enter his big bodied counterpart but sexual inexperience proved to be a roadblock. An air of uncomfortably filled the small sedan as the two grew frustrated with their inabilities. After about ten minutes of unsuccessful attempts at insertion the hefty gentleman had arrived at his destination of sexual ecstasy. "This is what my not fat friends talk about" he thought has excitement filled his entire body. The rotund lass that accompanied him felt a feeling of shame and disappointment, as her dreams of this interaction had been more grand that what the chubby fellow was providing her. Tens of seconds had past and the man had gathered some confidence about himself as he began to feel light-headed, "Oh no", he thought and seconds later came the conclusion of the outing. He hung his husky head in disappointment, she laid and meaty hand on his beating chest and said "Hey good stuff, that wasn't too bad at all!"