Gangam Style

He likes girls

"Hey sexy lady"
City
Bus
Subway
Elevator
Dancing kid
Yellow Jacket
Dance Moves
Hot tub

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-Audience: People my age or close to it.
-I talked about something that a lot of people my age would agree with.
-It fit in with the design nicely.

ADVERTISIN SHIT

The play on Nike's "Just Do It" campaign in this ad  is them saying "Just Douche It" because the guy is wearing athletic clothing and he is eating unhealthy stuff, making him look like a douche bag. Nike clothing has been associated with douche bags for some time now and this ad recognizes that and pokes fun at it. They even use colors synonymous with douche bag guys and they capture the true essence of a douche bag with his sun glasses.

Advertising Thing

In Us Magizine, there is an advertisment for Mott's apple sauce showing a woman being hugged by her son. People who see this will feel good because it's really cute and moms who see this will be influenced to by Motts because they want that loving relationship with their child.The ad is promoting a family lifestyle showing a happy family makes people want to have a family. The ad makes me think if I bought Motts for my child that they would be happy and love me. The audience is the mothers who read Us and even single woman who would want children in the future. I wish my mom gave me Mott's, even though I hate apple sauce. At the bottom Mott's boasts the nutrional value of their snack which also would encourage a mother to buy the apple sauce for their child. The background of the adverisment is a bright yellow creating a happy thought and the mother and son are very good looking and well-kempt showing that upperclass people should get this snack too.

Class Blogger 10/29

Things we are planning on doing today:
-Discuss Reading
-Free writing
-Sharing (If time allows)
-Homework: Bring to class 1-2 magazines or newspapers you read regularly.

A.) Reading Discussion: (Suggestions from passage)
1. Find a subject you care about. If you care about it, writing becomes easier.
2.  Don't ramble. (Irrelevant items, run-on sentences, etc.)
3. Keep it simple. Avoid long, complex sentences with big words that have no meaning.
4. Have the guts to cut. Cutting unnecessary thoughts will help your writing.
5. Sound like yourself. Creating your own tone and voice will improve your writing.(Like how Floridians, particularity douche Floridians, say "fire" for good. Or Boston natives say "wicked")
6. Say what you need to say. (Pg. 587)
7. Pity the readers.

B.) Free Writing
-20 Minutes to write.
-Editing after writing.
-Some people wrote with topics provided by Ms. Lang, others with whatever came to their mind.
-It's really cold outside.

Free Writing 10/29

It was 1:35 AM in an orange 1997 Pontiac, two heavy set 23 year old's were clumsily working towards losing their virginity. The portly young man made countless attempts to enter his big bodied counterpart but sexual inexperience proved to be a roadblock. An air of uncomfortably filled the cramp sedan as the two grew frustrated with their inabilities. After about ten minutes of unsuccessful attempts at insertion the hefty gentleman had arrived at his destination, sexual ecstasy. "This is what my not fat friends talk about" he thought has excitement filled his entire body. The rotund lass that accompanied him felt a feeling of shame and disappointment, as her dreams of this interaction had been more grand that what the chubby fellow was providing her. Tens of seconds had past and the man had gather some confidence about himself as he began to feel light-headed, "Oh no", he thought and seconds later came the conclusion of the outing. He hung his husky head in disappointment, she laid and meaty hand on his beating chest and said "Hey good stuff, that wasn't too bad at all!"



Editing:

It was 1:35 AM in an orange 1997 Pontiac, two heavy set 23 year old's were clumsily working towards losing their respective virginity. The portly young man made countless attempts to enter his big bodied counterpart but sexual inexperience proved to be a roadblock. An air of uncomfortably filled the small sedan as the two grew frustrated with their inabilities. After about ten minutes of unsuccessful attempts at insertion the hefty gentleman had arrived at his destination of sexual ecstasy. "This is what my not fat friends talk about" he thought has excitement filled his entire body. The rotund lass that accompanied him felt a feeling of shame and disappointment, as her dreams of this interaction had been more grand that what the chubby fellow was providing her. Tens of seconds had past and the man had gathered some confidence about himself as he began to feel light-headed, "Oh no", he thought and seconds later came the conclusion of the outing. He hung his husky head in disappointment, she laid and meaty hand on his beating chest and said "Hey good stuff, that wasn't too bad at all!"

Paper 2 and Shitttttttttttt

I appreciate the feedback I got on my paper. I am happy to hear that my paper is heading in the correct direction and I will take the advice given about how to move forward and hopefully do well on the paper. I will touch more on Obama's upbringing and background and shine more light on how he serves as a cultural icon for the people of his likeness.