Draft Peer Revision

My partners allowed as to how I be sure to include specific detailed stories with my essay to ensure that the point I'm making is clear. They had positive things to say about what I had planned. My essay is about how social media has effected my life drastically. I need to include the lessons I learned from my usage of social media through the years and go far in depth telling the stories that I eluded to in my outline. They provided advice on how to organize the essay based on the years I tell stories from in a chronological order to show a maturing in my life.