1. I touch only very briefly on the subject of the essay, leaving the reader curious. The way I do introduce my point, however, is in my eyes tantalizing and will attract the reader.
2. I recap my points briefly my points while at the same time inviting the reader to possibly consider to themselves how music has effected their lives personally.
3. It really doesn't answer it. I guess I'll have to change that. It kinda is like 4 sentences about what music has impacted in my life and then ends, I'll fix it tonight don't you worry!
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